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Review:tangledconstellations says:
Hey, lovely,

I really, really enjoyed this. It was so gentle and loving and the whole atmosphere was just bliss. Neville is honestly such a cutie pie, and your interpretation of him was so wonderful. He is gentle and so full of love, and the examples you've given, of him plucking up the courage, and always getting things a little bit wrong, are just divine. It makes this piece all the more wonderful.

The italics and the centering of text are really interestingly and thoughtfully used. It makes us connect with the speaker all the more, and impresses her wants and love for Neville that little bit extra. It's so telling of your talent that this is so short but yet you manage to create this amazing back story, and I kind of feel as though there is a whole other life waiting to be delved in to. It is really quite magnificent.

I'm gonna quit with the gushing now, and just point out the fact that I can provide NO constructive criticism or negative points about this. It was flawless - fluffy and lovely and the perfect love Neville has always needed.

:) Laura xxx

Author's Response: Hi Laura! Thanks for stopping by!

It's really great that you liked the gentleness of this piece and the warmth I tried to fold into it. I definitely wanted to write something that was fluffy but not completely... meaningless, you know? It still has that layer of plot underneath of it, so that you have some context for this soft little moment.

Thanks so much for your sweet review :)

-Amanda


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