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Review:starryskies55 says:
I was so engrossed with this chapter my laptop ran out of battery and I didn't even notice :( I was practically crying at Ginny yelling at George, and George's horrible reaction. It was unfair, and George felt so small and vulnerable to me I just wanted to hug him. I'm still all sad now.

Fred's appearance was similarly sad. His words seemed to hold like a inner sadness? His clothes being raggedy and the line about the Three Broomsticks made it really sad, like the afterlife was awful to be there and that's why Fred wanted George to make the most of his life... but yeah. Lit student. *shrugs*

The bit about the birdsong was good, it reminded me of something on a film but I can't remember what. YES I DO. Dr Who, where Amy, Rory and Matt Smith kept falling asleep and waking up in different realities and it was really loud birdsong before they did. Okay, mystery solved, I'm happy.

Another really sad and awesome chapter, I'm so looking forward to an update! :D

Author's Response: Wow, thanks, I hope your laptop is ok ;) I think you know my opinion of Ginny, so I had to make her just a LITTLE bit horrible :P
I also appreciate your literaturey comments about Fred, it's probably just as hard in the afterlife for Fred as it is in life for George, they are both separated, right? :( HUGS.
And OH NO :( I completely forgot about that Dr. Who thing! It was just meant to be the birdsong from outside the window which George incorporated into his dream :P
Again, thanks for your lovely reviews, YOU'RE SO AWESOME.
-Olive you again again again


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