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Review:tangledconstellations says:
Hey again!

Another super chapter :) This was one was really good to see the dynamics of the family. I love that James is the older brother support, but it's really heartwrentching how he feels he is barely needed :( in a way I feel as though Harry should be at home with them, looking after them, but because he's not I feel for Ginny 100 times more. I wish Al wasn't apathetic and low; he cant afford to be :(

I am really excited to see what the next chapter brings! Introducing the new characters was a good move, I assure you. It prevents the story from feeling too claustrophobic, so, good move! It was actually a nice release to have the opportunity to go to James' flat and see new faces that aren't so distraught - kinda keeps us sane. Undoubtedly though it is a horrible situation to be in. The realisation from James towards the end: '...he hadn’t had much of a chance to think about his baby sister. Who was missing. F-*-' just really shows the impact it has had on everyone. It is something that encompasses the whole family - even Hermione is concerned.

It's going to be fantastic to see where you take this in the next chapter!

Laura xxx

Author's Response: Thanks so much! I've loved both of your reviews! The dynamics of the Potter family were rather difficult as their personalities are so contrasting at times. There will be more on Harry in the next few chapters and we find out more of what he is doing.

I'm glad you like the new characters! Walking the line between tragedy and normalcy is hit and miss, but not everyone is going to be distraught over Lily's absence.

I'm thrilled that you commented on James's reaction because that may be my favorite part of the story yet.

Thanks for the reviews!

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