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Review:tangledconstellations says:
Helloo,

Your summary really drew me in, and admittedly at first I thought this was about Lily Evans losing her life. But, once I saw it was Next-Gen I was really intrigued about what this could be.

This is a really strong first chapter. I think you've captured Ginny and Harrys relationship really well, and I kind of like that Harry is flyaway with his anger and frustration. He does seem as though he would be a stubborn but caring dad. Albus is so lovely, too. It must be so scary trying to deal with a missing sibling, but I think White dealed with him really well. Genuinely at this point I am concerned with Lily. I hope Harry isn't right and she is just at a friends. Alas, I don't think that's the case :(

Your writing style is really enjoyable and effective. You tell the story so effortlessly and really let us slip into the mystery of this. Saying that though you haven't by any means neglected any description or anything, and the dialogue is fully fleshed and so interesting, too. You're a great writer! I'll be sure to keep checking up on your authors page, too :)

For now, I'll jump on to the other chapter :) I really hope Lily gets found :(

Laura xxx

Author's Response: Yeah, the summary used to say Lily Luna Potter, but it didn't fit when I changed it. I kind of assumed it would confuse some people, but there's not much I can do about that. :/

I'm glad you liked the way I portrayed the Potters! They're a bit different than they've been in other fics, but their situation is also different. Especially for Al, he doesn't get a chance to live a normal life.

Wow thanks! That's so sweet, it really makes my day to read reviews like this! Thanks for such nice reviews!

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