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Review:Jchrissy says:
This was such a fun first chapter! I love every detail you put into your writing, from James shrugging his shoulders to Mari biting her lip. I also have to say, I'm with James on this one. It goes back to the age old warning of never trying to change a man (we just train them how to be more civilized so we don't have to swat them with a newspaper every time they do something bad ;) )

Anyway, your writing is superb like always. You have dropped us into the middle of the plot, which I love. We weren't forced to read paragraphs of background information, instead you gave us hints along the way.

Also, I think you are doing a great job with James's characterization. He seems so infuriating and so lovable at the same time. It's perfect :)!

Great first chapter, m'dear!

Oops, I also wanted to add how I love that you have James almost avoiding everyone of her points, but not exactly. He counteracts something about what she said, without counteracting what she actually said. It made me giggle quite a bit :)!

Jami

Author's Response: Aw, thank you! :) I tend to agree with you - you can't change a person. You have to either live with who they are or not. I think changing someone with Weasley blood might be especially hard... :P

Thank you so much for the lovely review. ♥


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