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Review:the_creator_questionmark says:
I usually do not review but i wanted to have a chance to say say that this story is completely unbielieveable. If Hermione Granger is as she is supposed to be portrayed, y'know as a hard headed, stubborn, know it all, then I'm pretty damn sure she wouldn't have taken all this in the stride that you are describing. Don't get me wrong, the death of her parents and the loss of her home would have changed her for good, but were you not willing to let that tiny bit of fight, that I know she has, left in her. How is she possibly letting herself believe that a glamour was place on her nearly all of her life and that only a severely screwed up potion help to show her true form. Why is just taking this lying down, why isn't she asking why or who or what, or any of the questions that a true know it all would ask?
And for what I know this story is supposed to be about a bunch of teenage wizards and witches set in Harry Potter, not some hop up SAT spewing Dawson's Creek rejects. Why are they so mature and willing to forgive? Where is the anger, the fight, the fustration - even Dawson's Creek had some fustration.
Again I don't usually post, but I think this was needed. Maybe now that your dissertation is complete you'll have time to fix this and stop with the goody-goody, why can't we be friends bull.

Author's Response: If you find it so unbelievable then don't read it. I took original work from an author and made my own story around it, that's what fanfiction is.

She doesn't ask questions because she's already had enough drama she's got to the point where she just doesn't care. The changes that happen are just taken in her stride.

They aren't all willing to forgive, if you read more you'd find the anger and the frustration and the fight.

You shouldn't base your opinion on something from the first few chapters.

I have never watched Dawson's creek so I can't comment on what it's like.

Yes my dissertation is complete but I won't be fixing this story because it's fine the way it is. I suggest that if you find so much wrong with it then you don't continue to read it. I'm sure there are other stories out there that will better suit your criteria.

Thanks for the review.

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