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Review:Indigo Seas says:
Gah, this is almost like poetry, you know? It may have something to do with the way it's structured, or maybe just the flow of it all. But I loved it, even though I'm not always a fan of poetry.

Your words are just marvelous. They seem to melt into each other with each coming line, and I absolutely love the little parenthetical afterthoughts you've added to some of the paragraphs. Even though they almost disrupt the flow, it's a good kind of disruption.

I can definitely see why this was the featured one-shot! Your writing is just... gah. I could read it forever. Honestly, you make it seem so effortless. That, my dear, is true talent.

x Rin

Author's Response: That's such a high compliment! Really, thank you so much for saying that. :) There was a definite intent to give this a bit of a poetic style -- a narrative sort of poem, if you will -- and your saying so without prompting is great for me!

For something written in about an hour, I'm so happy at the reaction that this one-shot has received, and it's so nice to hear that you enjoyed it, too. I'll agree with you, I think, that the parentheses do provide a good kind of disruption, although it might be vain for me to say so. :P I'm so happy you stopped by to read this for me! Thanks as always for doing so, and I'll be ogling your lovely compliments for weeks to come. ♥ This means a lot to me!!

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