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Review:Aderyn says:
Hi! I'm here from the blue/bronze review tag!

This is a nice start. A lot of things happen in this chapter, and I think you have the pace right for the beginning of a story like this one. I can already see where Lucy is going to be overloaded: wedding, head girl, family, friends. That sounds like lots of stress!

Anyways, I like your portrayal of all the family relationships. Molly and Lucy seem to get along well. And Percy is a proud, but a bit over protective father, which seems to fit with his character as well.

Just something I thought about, do Hugo and Lily have the same birthday, or just close ones?

Anyways, great start to this. There's a lot of energy to this story, and enough momentum to make me feel like reading more. :) If I have time, I will definitely try to do that, at one point or another. Good luck!

Author's Response: Hi, there! :) The blue/bronze review tag is amazing, right? So many lovely stories to read and review, and I'm glad you reviewed this one. Ha, you're right, poor Lucy! So much things to do, so little time to do it all. Percy was hard to pull off - he must have been more relaxed after the war, but it was hard /not/ to make him kind of uptight and stuffy, but I'm glad I pulled him off and struck a proper balance. And hey, all Weasley dads are overprotective ;)

As for your question - no, Hugo and Lily just have really close birthdays - according to my handy-dandy next gen birthdate chart, they were born two days apart. I think Hermione and Ginny in a hospital about to give birth at the same time would make it explode :p

Thanks so much reviewing, and it was an absolutely lovely one, too! Good luck on all your stories :)

- Linn

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