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Review:Deltaris says:
Another amazing chapter :)

I really think that Al and Alexa are handling this amazingly well and realistically. They really show that they are mature and that, even though they didn't want or expect this to happen at all, they're willing to find a way to make it work.

I have so many questions about Daphne and Draco! Like, what happened to make Theo dislike them so much. But I'm sure you'll answer them in time :)

I did notice one mistake:
"This kid is gonna be me and Kieron" - I think you left out 'with.' It's the only big mistake grammar wise that I noticed. On that note, your grammar is amazing!

Del<3

Author's Response: Yeah, I don't normally read stories about teenage pregnancy because sometimes it feels over dramatic. So, when I decided to join the challenge and write one, I wanted it to be different. I'm glad it's showing because I've been a little nervous about it, as it's very new.

They will be answered, yes. :)

No, I wrote it like that intentionally. It's like saying the kid will be the same as them; kids who go to a parent for a weekend. She's saying they'll be the same. Or that was how it was meant to come across as; literally being like its mum. But, if a word should be needed, I think it'll be 'like.' Maybe - "This kid is gonna be like me and Kieron." I don't know. lol. But thanks for pointing it out. :)

And thank you so much for the review.

Sam.


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