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Review:Keira7794 says:
Hello :)
I'm just popping in to read your lovely chapter for the 'Ronald Weasley Challenge'. The idea behind the challenge was to make Ron's positive attributes take a role on HPFF and I've got to say that you portrayed this brilliantly!

I love how Ron is the only Weasley to feel bad and decides to visit the Granger's house after he sees Hermione looking disappointed. At no point did Ron seem OOC and you really captured the relationship between Ron and his siblings.

Your characterisation was perfect! Fred and George were cheeky, (slightly rude) and I liked how they dressed as each other - thinking outside the box, just like they would. I loved Percy questioning whiter they'd have time to say thank you - it was so Percy without coming across as snobby! Gunny was cute - young yet independent! Charlie just seemed exasperated which is how I always imagine him to act like when Bill leaves him to go to Hogwarts!

Hermione was so cute! She just didn't quite get it, did she? She's still bossy but still remains childish and you've given a great back story for her. I really enjoyed this chapter so much!! The whole concept of the Weasleys taking Halloween so seriously and the Grangers handing out toothbrushes was brilliant!

I think there was a couple missing speech marks, but other than that - it was brilliant!! 10/10
Keira :)

Author's Response: Hello! This was a really lovely review to receive! I'm glad you like the story and my versions of the younger versions of the characters. :)

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