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Review:I_trusted_Snape13 says:
This was truly remarkable - it caught my interest from the very beginning and held it completely until Draco's last thought, which does not normally happen for me with chapters of this length. But, I adored this!

I'd been looking for a Draco/Astoria story and your stories were recommended by someone and I am SO glad! You're a fantastic writer!

I was so entranced by your opening scene with the Parkinson drowning, I thought that was a unique, captivating scene that definitly caught my entrance to the story.

I felt the trial was extremely well written and that you completely did it justice;which I imagine is not an easy thing to do.

I adored the way you portray Draco - he's completely canon, not out of character in the least. Even in third person narrative you know what he's thinking and that, to me, is how third person narrative should be. It was literally like reading one of JKR's books, he was so spot on!

I like the way Astoria saved him and the 'relationship' they've started, it's really open, yet secretive. I like the way their eyes didn't meet and they fell in love and got married! That's incredibly cheesy! This was great!

One more Draco compliment: I can't thank you enough for keeping him in character, I get SO tired of reading these stories where he's written like he's "changed" in to a character like Noah Calhoun from the Notebook! Good job!

This was a truly captivating, enticing first chapter and I guarantee that I will read more. Good job, I'm absolutely certain that JKR would be proud of this magnificent chapter. You certainly did her characters, and entire HP universe, justice.

Well done!
10/10

Author's Response: eee, thank you so much! this story is a lot of hard work and I find it quite hard to get into writing it, despite this being my otp and all, so having you come and leave this lovely review has put an enormous smile on my face!

it wasn't really an easy chapter to write, no, even if this is a rewrite of the original. draco's a very hard character to write, and it was pretty difficult to get that fine balance between creating sympathy for him and still managing to portray how nasty he is as a person - I still don't think I've got there with my characterisation is, it's an ongoing project, haha. so, again, it's made me grin that you're saying this, thank you so much!

thank you so much for leaving this wonderful review and I'm really glad you liked it :D ♥


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