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Review:forsakenphoenix says:
Oh, oh, oh, this. Why have I not read more of your work before? This is fabulous. I can't even put into words how much my heart aches. I'm left with a sort of hollow feeling in my chest, much like Lorcan, whose heart is laying on the floor at his feet.

Your characterizations are so strong here, so real. Luna, especially, oh my goodness..when she swooped in and spied her son's heart on the floor and then told him time would put it back together? Just, such a Luna thing to say and so perfect.

Poor Lorcan. Your imagery with his broken heart is fantastic and as I said, it dragged me in right with him. And Hugo - he thinks what he's doing is right, that he knows what's best and it kind of hurts that he doesn't seem as affected by this as Lorcan is. Poor, poor Lorcan. I just want to hug him.

The end was beautiful too. The repetition of Lorcan Lovegood sat alone...I don't know, I love the rhythm of it when I'm reading it, and that last bit, his heart all but tangled in his hand. Oomph. So powerful.

Your writing is so unbelievably gorgeous and I definitely need to make it a priority to read more of your work ASAP. Thanks for sharing this little piece of Lorcan's heart with us.

Author's Response: Ack, thank you. I don't even know how to respond to this coherently, so forgive my tangled mess of words as they come spilling out now.

Luna really, really scares me. It's not just that she's a canon character (though that scares me quite a bit just by itself). It's that everybody knows Luna, you know? Everybody knows what she's supposed to be like, and if you put one little word out of line (ha, English pun) they're going to come to your house and burn it down.

SO. That being said. Thank you for liking my Luna. I didn't want to have her say too much because I was afraid of her being OOC, but... thanks. :) It is very comforting to hear.

Ah, comments on writing just make my heart explode (in a good way, of course). I think they're some of the highest compliments someone can receive (which I may or may not have said before), so... thanks.

You are beyond lovely. Thanks for dropping by and liking my odd little Lorcan.

xx Rin

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