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Review:maskedmuggle says:
Well I'm sorry for how long it took me to review this second chapter even though I read it right after the first chapter! :) Ahh another brilliant chapter! I didn't even notice that you changed the point of views until you mentioned it in your A/N. The transition was just so flawless - everything was maintained just as well - the plot, the characterisation.. I think your third person is just as good as your first person, and you seem to be good at both :)

I love James' new job! Sounds exciting and I want to see if he can actually make that quidditch team better! Ooh some nice Ruby/James conversation there, looking forward to seeing more? :D And Hugo is very likeable! So all in all, a great follow up chapter! :) Well written~

Author's Response: That's perfectly alright, because your reviews are lovely and always worth the wait :) Oh dear, that's nice to hear. The third person was working well for me when I started off the story, but I took a long break in between posting the first and second chapter, and just couldn't get it to work. So I switched to first person. I'm glad it turned out okay, either way!

There will always be more! :D And yes, I refuse to give Hugo terrible characterization in principle lol. He is my fave

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