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Review:MistyMorning says:
I must tell you that I came across your story Untouchable yesterday and ended up staying up late reading it and trying to find spare seconds to finish it today. And then, I came to the end, where I saw a note with the words: Sequel posted. I promptly squealed out loud and hit the author link to find it.
Ahhh. There is was - Unwell. And better yet, the banner read part 2 of 4. But wait!, I thought. it says status: WIP. Well, I let my excitement override my good sense and clicked the link. Read 11 chapters. And came to the end, anxious for more.
Now you must understand that I rarely read a story that is not complete. It kills me to wait for updates (patience obviously not being one of the virtues bestowed upon me). But I was willing to do what I do for few stories - put it in my favorites, and wait for an update. But as I did that I realized something. You have neglected this story since December.
"Six months, and she has not updated," I bemoaned to myself. Is this worth it? And you started the story almost two years ago with 11 chapters posted. So I looked up your stories and noticed that you are still active and posting, recently too. And so I did what I do for few authors: I added this story to the list. Despite it not having been updated. And despite my insatiable need for the here and now, not in one month, not in half a year. I took a leap of faith because this story is that engrossing.
I am hoping you do not let me down! Obviously, you have a plot and a plan. Enough that this story is clearly designated as "Part 2 of 4." The first and early second story have drawn me in, made me stay up at night, and hunger for more of what will happen. It is a gift to be able to write a story, a plot, and characters that will do that. I empathized, cried, smiled, and clapped my hands (a bonus of not holding a book, you see). Don't let this story go to waste! Update it. Soon. And stick with it. Real life may get in the way, but you obviously have something good here, and you shouldn't let this fall by the wayside. Your excitement for the story and your creativity and relationship with your own characters shines through in your writing. Please don't let me have exercised my limited stores of patience in vain! Good Luck and I hope to see more!

Author's Response: WOW! I love long, meaningful reviews that don't repeat the same all-too-familiar stuff :) If I said you convinced me to keep working on this story... I would lie - you totally did :D For the longest time I've hated Anna, to be honest xD She can be pretty pathetic - but you're making me want to write her again! And yes, I've planned the UN-series to be four parts - I'm currently writing part 3 and 4 as well... kind of like back-to-back between them all.
Good stuff, I'm telling you!
Nevermind real life - I'm totally thrilled for this now! :D
Thank you again for writing such a nice comment!! ^_^


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