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Review:Moonyxluna says:
Hi! Here with your requested review :)

I really liked this chapter because I think it got the plotline going. Answering your first question, yes, the story is progressing very well. It holds my interest (which I will talk more below about) and I like the pace you are taking things at. Also, the newspaper article beginnings are a very neat touch!

I still am really interested in this story, and where you plan on taking it. I think the changes you are making all compliment eachother so nicely in making this your own tale that it keeps me hooked in. I said above that this was the start of the plot for me, so I am curious (although I have a few suspicions) how you will take the story from Bill wanting to marry Gabrielle, and vice versa, to making this a Bill and Fleur story. I don't think they are overbearing and I definitely am enjoying reading this.

I hope my praise answered your third question :) If not, then yes, you make sense! By now the reader should (hopefully!) understand the changes and just sit to enjoy this.

I loved that, through everything Molly felt the same to me. She was still this heartwarming loving mother and I like that you kept that the same. In the little bit of Fleur I really liked the 'big sister' role she took at her sisters 'marriage' announcement.

As always, I have to end with a please re-request! I'd love to see where this is going next. Keep up the great work!

Author's Response: I'm glad that the story seems to be progressing. I'm trying to keep this short so am getting in details without putting too much in there.

I'm glad that the characters aren't overbearing. I've still got to keep them somewhat recognizable with canon while also blending it in with this other series of books that's inspired this!

Molly was fun to write and there will be lots of her in the coming story :) I'm glad that you liked this so far! Hopefully the block of writers lets go of me soon so I can write!

xChar


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