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Review:WitnesstoitAll says:
I was trolling around the archives looking for a good minor character fic for the Review challenge at TGS and this caught my eye!

I have always found Alastor to be an incredibly interesting character. He is very two dimensional in the HP series, which opens all sorts of questions in the world of fanfiction. I thought this was a brilliant way to tie together a picture of his life and motivations in a life flash before your eyes sort of way. I have never really thought out my own head-canon for Alastor, but it makes so much sense the way you've portrayed it here. His father marching off to war with the Muggles, that he committed himself to his studies, strived to be the best.

I loved his assurity that they would lay his order of merlin on his tomb. What spirt he has! and the fact that he was smiling when it was all said and done. How apropriate -- he was a proud man, and he died content with the life he lived.

Great one shot!!

Author's Response: Ooh, thanks for picking me :)

Alastor was fun to write - very difficult, but very interesting. I'm glad you liked my brief bit of head canon and how I tried to bring him out from being two-dimensional to really being his own man with his own ideals.

Thanks so much for this kind review :)


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