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Review:xxstaindrosesxx says:
I was a bit skeptic about reading this at first due to the length being exactly 500 words, but it is wonderful.

I love the way you managed to capture such a touching idea in so little length. At first I had gotten the impression you were discussing James and Lily with Harry inside of Lily, especially with the whole flying on the toy broomstick and what not, but I looked at the story facts beforehand, so I knew that wasn't the case. It almost felt as if you were trying to compare the two, that perhaps they had similar lives growing up, just in terms of the difference between good and evil, right and wrong. I really enjoyed that concept quite well. I'm not sure if that's what you were going for, but that's how it seemed to me.

I love it, that even back then, Narcissa was trying to protect Draco, and it was Lucius who continued to say no, to reassure her that they would be alright. Good follow through with that, and a nice tie in.

Overall, I'm actually quite glad I read this story. Good job!

Author's Response: Okay, I must have forgotten that pesky submit button because I was sure I responded to this.

Anyway, I'm so glad you liked this! And as for comparing them, I actually started this piece with the idea of it being Lily and James, then changed it to the the Malfoys.

And, if we are being totally honest here, I was hoping to trick a few readers who didn't look at the descriptions into thinking this was the Potters ;)!

I'm so happy you liked this! Thank you for the lovely review!!

Jami


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