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Review:dirtydeedsdonedirtcheap says:
I'm excreting rainbows

^ I said this once. I didn't get a good reaction from the people around me. I thought it was pretty funny but then again I think I'm hilarious.

Don't be so self deprecating; it's like stepping back into ten years ago.

^ So true. I feel like Molly has grown but there's still a bit of Molly from the first story here. Childish. Snarky. Angry. Sarcastic. I'm not mad at her for it.

Bits of it. I try not to. I dislike the feeling of nausea.

^ Haha. I wish I was friends with Molly or atleast had a friend like her. Everyone sounds so boring compared to her right now. The banter! I love!

I enjoyed this immensely and I'm glad it's finished so we won't have to wait too long for updates. I don't know how you write though. I mean, really, really? There was so much conversation going on it made my head spin, in a good way of course but then I had to sit back and take a few deep breaths because it was a bit tiring for me! Molly is too smart for me. So, you're too smart for me. I'm going to have to go study a dictionary.

Author's Response: You didn't get a good reaction? DAMN! I love that line. I felt like Molly was being hilarious as I wrote it. Also, Deeds, you are definitely hilarious.

Molly is usually a lot more put together, but the second a relationship goes wrong she starts REGRESSING a bit. It's how it goes.

Ahaha, there was waayy loads of conversation in this because, well, I accidentally wrote this. Wasn't intending to write a sequel then sat down and wrote this out purely in dialogue form (along with like... the rest of it) and then I had to go back and put in the other bits - definitely not how I usually write (or how I recommend writing, because it was head-hurty to edit it).

Thanks for such a lovely review! :)


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