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Review:justonemorefic says:
Rin! I always love reading these pretties from you. You have such a way with romance, full of these poignant moments. I love how vague you keep it in the beginning at first, and little by little, I figure out more of how their relationship was like. It's so tense all the way through; I wasn't ever quite sure what one of them might do, how they feel toward each other after - what I assume - a long absence.

Your description is lovely everywhere but this! when each has been righted and stand once more like the sentinels they should. :3 this is my favorite. And this whole line: He laughs, a startling sound that ricochets off the glass in the windows and falls, empty and hollow, against her ears. “You've told me a lot of things, Daphne.” It's chilling how I hear it.

The ending ;A; The ending's just so guhh. I love the dialogue you chose; I can feel their tiredness, when the rain overwhelms them both.

♥ lovely, as always :3

Author's Response: Allow me to go running around in circles and dancing around, for a moment.

Goodness, thank you so much. I haven't had a review on this one for a little while, so your unexpected review is just... unexpected! And so, so lovely. I cannot tell you how much I appreciate it.

I'm really glad that you were tense the whole way through (which is not to say that I'm wishing you ill-feelings, or anything, of course :P). Atmosphere is something I struggle with sometimes, especially when it's supposed to be semi-uncomfortable, so thank you for saying that.

Gah, thank you so much. You are just a wonderful, marvelous person.

xx Rin


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