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Review:DracosCookie says:
Okay, don't get me wrong but I am a hardcore Dramione
shipper and I am obsessed with the pairing. This story is
painful to read because I am a Harry potter nerd, the
thing is that you made Hermione a Black and had an
arranged marriage with Draco. But you forgot one little itty
bitty detail that throws the entire story line into
painfulness. You see Draco is half Black because his mum
is a black, so technically you made cousins marry each
other and while I understand the inbreeding, I don't think
they went to the extremes of second cousins. So I'm sorry
but you just should've done a bit of research before you
wrote this story.

Sincerely, DracosCookie

Author's Response: I do know this. I have done this research. It is my opinion that Purebloods have probably done far worse than second cousins. The fact is that in many places, at least in the U.S., (I am unfamiliar with Britain's laws) second cousins marriage is allowed and legal. Secondly, for the beginning of this story, Draco does not believe that Hermione is actually a Black. By the time it is discovered that she is indeed a Black, he's already fallen in love with her. I began this story knowing full well they were cousins. I don't like this fact but I do believe it is an extreme some people go to, some go further although I highly disagree with that.

I understand where this would bother you but I did do my research. You can however fault me for naming her Virginia as that is Ginny's name. That was research I missed.

I'm sorry if this seems rude, but I spent a great deal of time figuring out what pureblood family I wanted Hermione to be from and I don't like being told I didn't do research when I did.

I appreciate you reading through the entire story before commenting though. I'm glad that you were able to read it regardless of how painful the story was for you. I appreciate the read and review and hope you will continue to read.

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