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Review:classicblack says:
Beautifully long and adoring review in action:
Amelie's dad is such a *insert word of choice here*. But his appearance allowed James to be adoring adorable and it makes me want my own James. Please can you send me one?!

I loved this chapter. Personally, I would've liked to know a bit more- like why exactly Adrian came to the wedding and why he left and why he's such a *insert choice word here* Hopefully it's in future chapters?

I loved that James had his little epiphany about how great he has it. I also would have loved if he'd actually smushed cake in Adrian's face. Alas, James is too much of a gentleman for that. *sighs*

I don't think I've mentioned how much I like the format of this story. It's not one straightforward, definite plot, but a bunch of little splurges from different points in Amelie and James's relationship. I really like it.

Anyway, fantastic chapter with just the right amount of romance and humour.
Happy writing,

Author's Response: Who wouldn't want a James? He is adorable (but goes on to be extremely problematic). I'm afraid P&P would be quite expensive, and I doubt he'd be able to sit still in a package for that long.

I can only imagine what your 'choice words' are, for I am completely innocent. He's basically a gold digger as well, and was at the wedding to ask Flo for some dollar.

Yeah, I'm not 100% on character development so this lets me write the chapters and scenes that I want, without having to write filled chapters or boring subplot (see sequel for example).

Thanks for reviewing! I'm glad you enjoyed it.

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