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Review:Moonyxluna says:
god, this was just so comforting. It was adorable, and loving, and so different! I mean, okay. I love your writing style already, but when I clicked on this I was not expecting to have such a heartwarming feeling! It really shows how multi-talented you are.

I think my favorite was her remembering back to Neville asking only moments after Ernie. I thought that was so sweet! And believable, as well.

Hannah was characterized very neatly here. I liked her 'oh god, I'm old' moment when her waitress walked in. It showed how much she's been through without even realizing.

Again, nothing but the highest praise! This was so beautifully and carefully written, I really enjoyed it!

Author's Response: Comforting - that's a great word for what I wanted to convey, and I'm happy that it worked. I know I don't usually do fluff, so I was a bit nervous to get the reactions to this one, and I'm pleased that it all seemed to work well for you.

It's great that this seemed believable. I really wanted it to feel simple, flirtacious, and sweet. They're both just so normal, you know?

Thanks for another kind review :)

-Amanda


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