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Review:TheGoldenKneazle says:
I SEE HOW YOU BROUGHT YELLOWNESS INTO THIS 8D THIS MATCH! PURE AWESOMENESS. SO MUCH WELSH WIN. ALSO LILY IS MADE OF WIN. AND OCEAN. Scorpius is possibly made of win, it's hard to say when he's dating a blonde bimbo (she's everything that wjalisycuu /doesn't/ stand for! but clever twist with her as the landlady! also, SO MANY KUDOS POINTS FOR GETTING TOWIE IN THERE) but I liked seeing more of his character in there.

It's great that Scorpius is getting involved a bit more and interacting with Lily; it seemed very casual and weirdly comfortable, which was really nice!! But hell, what's he doing with CARIS? I hope we get to have a nice sit-down with lots of these characters, because I have the inclination to like (loljk ABSOLUTELY FANGIRL MASSIVELY OVER) these characters but Lily's wild lifestyle has thus far prevented sit-downs and chats ;) I can see why, though, since if I were her tea would be taking a backseat in my mind. But then I guess tea is always in the backseat for her!

ANYHOO, I LOVED THE WELSHNESS!!! RUGBY!!! BLOW-UP DAFFODILS!! (I want one SO much, they're the coolest things since unsliced bread 8D) NOBODY REALLY GETTING THE RULES AND WARM THINGS THAT SHOULD BE COLD!! 8D Ahha it was all so brilliant, I love the vague randomness that sails through your chapters in a style reminiscent of Starving Artists before emotions got properly involved (best bit, frankly. But if blow-up daffs start getting thrown by a mopey Scorpius I'll know where you got it from ;P )

ALSO JUST NAME ME NO.1 FANGIRL!! It makes me so happy to be mentioned as youf fangirl 83 AND WHEN SOME SHIPPINESS HAPPENS I WILL BE HELPING YOU WITH SHIP NAMES (other than "I will go down with you" since that's just a bit of a WHUT? ship name) Yes, Imma stop rambling now. PLEASE WRITE LILY'S JOB SOON, I sense amusement already in bucketloads, and also I'd like to say how refreshing and gorgeous your style of writing is! It's different from anything else I've read and I luuurve it all, please carry on writing forever and ever :D

Toodle pip,
Lottie Fangirl Lewis ;) [I haven't forgotten our wedding, you know]

Author's Response: MY EYES! THEY EXPLODE FROM THE HYPER CAPITALS ONSLAUGHT LOTTIE! 8D ♥

Oh no, Scorpius is NOT dating Caris! Nononononono. She is just this weird stalker. I'll have to make that more obvious :P OH YAY I'M GLAD THE TOWIE REFERENCE WASN'T WEIRD. I've only watched...one episode...ever...and hated it. So I don't know whether Caris actually /is/ someone who could have stepped right out of towie or not...But anyway.

You're very right-- I need to focus more on individual characters instead of frightening away potential readers with showers of random, eccentric and towie-like people all at once :P FEAR NOT, I SHALL TAKE YOUR ADVICE AND SIT DOWN AND TALK AND GET TO KNOW ALL THE CHARACTERS. That was a very tremendulous way to subtly/cryptically tell me what needs work while fangirling at the same time by the way. -huggles-

Blow-up daffodils FTW, ahh. I do have one. It's awesome. And called Bill.

Starving Artists was definitely a massive inspiration for parts of this :D I just love peppersweet's style so much, I wanted to try it myself! :3

Ah I lurve you so very muchly ♥ -tackle hugs- And thank you for this review!! Squee!!

Love you lots like jelly tots,
Annon lottiefangirl Cumberbatch [I haven't forgotten either ♥]


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