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Review:lauraf68 says:
Daazle,
LOVED these last few chapters as I caught up on my reading. The Yule Ball was great. Interesting little tid bit you threw in there with the first kiss reaction and the memories/visions. Gave us a bit more depth of what Jade's "issues" are. I'm glad Snape was who caught them after cerfew as the detention gave him a chance to "advise" Jade. I like how Snape lead her to understand she has a right to be happy if she chooses to be (plus I like how you had her "make-up" to Fred--sometimes a kiss is all a boy/man needs--even though you'd rather like to kick them in the butt).

Keep up the good work!! Happy Writing!! ~~ Lauraf68

Author's Response: There was a little bit of help for Snape finding them since all her mental barriers collapsed, including the one to Snape. (yes, Snape very much witnessed Jade's first kiss)
We are slowly moving towards Jade's issues...the vast, vast number of issues.
Glad you enjoyed all the chapters. I have been working to get them submitted as quickly as I can. I'm almost 2/3rds done posting this and I'm not even half way done on the next story Dx


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