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Review:Deltaris says:
I really liked the insight into Lucius's mother. We never learned much about her, or his father, in canon. You did a good job showing pieces of what she was like and what she meant to the young Lucius.

Narcissa seems to remind me more of Pansy than herself here. I can't picture her vying for Lucius's attention the way that she does. She may not have been the lunatic that Bella was, but she certainly was a proud Black daughter. I am interested to see how the whole Narcissa/Lucius/Sage thing plays out though :)

Del<3

Author's Response: Yep! I've also had the same comments about Narcissa ^_^ For her character, I plan on tweaking a little bit of who she originally is for this story, to accommodate the plot; same goes for Lucius. As much as possible though, I am trying my best to let, both the Lucius and Narcissa characters, keep their aristocratic/ superiority attitudes.

Thanks for the review!!! Stay tuned for Chapter 4; it's been in the queue for almost 2 days i believe... should be up soon ^_^


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