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Review:HallowsAndHorcruxes says:
Oh this deinfatly explains a lot of what happened and why which is something that reader will want to know. As while sometimes leaving things mysertious works it is also nice to know what actually happened too.

I like the fact that you chose to have this chapater from Albus's point of view as it helps the read to have a chance to sympathise with him and reveal his character's feelings. It also explains his actions and why he did them which I feel makes me not want to just out right hate a character without knowing there side of it.

I also think it's good that you have referanced events from earlier chapater's as it helps to tie everything together!

Author's Response: Thanks so much!!

When I planned the story, I wanted to give each of them a chance to have their say, and I really tried to make neither of them the villain, though I was a little prejudiced against Albus. I really put off writing this chapter, because I didn't want to make him seem too mean!! D:

I tried to tie everything together... I may have been a little vague in Melinda's chapter, and I'll probably be editing a lot after the queue reopens in July. I made the first chapter a little vague (huge risk, I know) to try and catch people's attention...

Thank you!! :)

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