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Review:HallowsAndHorcruxes says:
I think this was a nice little insight in the past between the two with the little snippets through out the chapater. How they met, why they broke up. It helps me to understand the events of the first chapater.

Though I am a little confused about what date Melinda herself is in with it bobbing from past to present as all I know is we are six month after the break up but not actually when that is. Though it's not all that important I suppose and just me being silly.

Again another good chapater keep it up.

Author's Response: It's okay. I know it's a little bit confusing.

With the "six months later" bit, I was going for a general time, around six months after they broke up in late October.

Thank you!! :)


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