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Review:HallowsAndHorcruxes says:
Oh this is quite interesting I must say! I would have never thought of portrarying Albus in such a way like this but I find that it makes me wonder why he is so. It was me wondering what they faught about that has come to ended their relationship.

While I'm not the keenest one people using houses to sterotype characteristic's of characters I do think that you have used it quite cleverly within your story so far. Also your descriptions are well written which is always good within a story and helps people to visualise things which is something I am very found of being artistic myself.

All in all a quite enjoyable chapater!

Author's Response: Thank you so very much!! I['m glad you liked it!

And I'm not too big a fan of stereotyping the houses either, but I was trying to go for certain characteristics that made them be a Slytherin or a Ravenclaw, such as Albus' ambition and Melinda's brains. I wasn't trying to make them bad or good based on their house, but just trying to show that sometimes, they embodied the characteristics a little TOO well.

I'm glad you liked my descriptions! I always worry about whether I've described something adequately or not. :)


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