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Review:ScorpiusRose17 says:
Hi there!

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I Love this chapter! I really like how the progression on the returning characters is so strong. I felt horrible for Joshua. That poor kid just cannot catch a break at all. I was excited for Glyn and Greg and attending the slug club meeting.

I really think you do a great job showing all these boys in a very positive, but true light. Boys would definitely be up to trouble and have these worries. There would be a child that would quote their rugby coach and a lot of swearing. One thing I was quite surprised with is how much a twelve year old really swears. You hold true to their ages.

The descriptions were great and I loved the picture I was able to imagine while I read along. I am curious to learn more about the first year boys and how they are all going to fit into this Slytherin mold.

Keep up the awesome writing! =)


Author's Response: Thank you - and apologies for such an appallingly late response. Our end of term makes Hogwarts look sane.

Pleased that the character progression is strong and that they are building up their personalities and roles in the story.

I haven't written any more lately - although I am finally managing to sit down on the laptop and relocate my muse - but I get the feeling that things might just end up getting worse for Josh before they get any better.

As always,


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