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Review:angel_speaks says:
Oh my goodness! This is a lot ALOT of potential!!! Seriously!!! While i was reading this, I was growing anxious/ excited to see what happens next! I can't wait to see what the next chapter has in store for me!

There are a few grammatical errors here and there but its not biggie ^_^ The story flow is good and so are the characters. I know that George's original canon is all about the humor but considering that this is taking place after the war and the death of his brother, it's understandable (esp. since its a major part on the plot!)

I've always wanted to do a FredorGeorge/ OC story but I'm just to afraid to do so Maybe if someone worked with me on it (like a collab story), I'd so go for it! Well, going back on track...Good job for the first chapter! Please feel free to place a request on my review thread at the forums, Emesia's Reviews!

Happy Writing! 10/10

Author's Response: Thanks so much for your review! I really love long reviews, as they always give me motivation to write faster, so I really appreciate this :) I hope the next few chapters live up to your expectation.
Thanks for pointing out the grammatical errors, a friend of mine has told me about this, and I've seen them too, it's either a typo or me just being careless. I'll fix them as soon as I get more chapters posted :) And yes, I thought George would be changed a lot by Fred's death, and considering Fred is thought of as the twin who starts the jokes, George would be left quite empty so it's really sad :(
A Fred/George OC story sounds like a great idea, Angelina never really sat well with me as a match for George (she danced with Fred at the Yule Ball, so yeah). Oh and I'll go to your review thread soon, definitely!
Thanks again for your review! :)
- Olive

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