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Review:emesias says:
Hiya!
Emesias here with your requested review!

This is the first fan fic that I've ever read about the Founders!!! I'm really glad that I was given the chance to read this piece as it is really good. As the era it itself has so much potential to bare fanfics especially in the romance/ drama genre, this one is definitely off to a good start ^_^

So far there is minimal discrepancies in the grammar, spelling and punctuation area, so good job! I think my main concern would be the flow of the story as I got a bit confused in trying to determine whether its about the 1st gen. founders or is it about their kids. Maybe if you can add little more clarification on that (hehe) Other than that, I'm looking forward to seeing how your version of these characters develop throughout the story and how they interact. Keep on writing!!!

I'm looking forward to the progress of this story. Please feel free to re- request! 8/10

Author's Response: I'm sooo sorry about the confusion. That's something everyone's told me, that there's a bit of a confusion in the middle. I'll sort that out :) Thank you soo much for reading and reviewing :) I'll keep you posted.

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