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Review:Serendipity1234 says:
This is getting so good! ;)
I love that Sirius obviously really likes her and wants to get to know her. He's such a gentleman and I'm glad Natalie appreciates that. They're so perfect together. I love their banter and chemistry. I can't wait to see what happens with them once the plan is complete.
I noticed Klara and Natalie didn't really plan what to do when they finish all the steps in the plan and I think this promises some disaster -which I'm excited to see. I wonder if they plan on telling Amos about the plan? Or just letting all the rumors dissipate and whatnot on their own time..? I feel like Natalie's sympathy will get the better of her at some point and she'll want him to have friends again, despite his awful personality. Maybe this will lead to her helping him get his friends back? Actually that's probably too much. Maybe she'll just ask people to stop spreading all the rumors and hope for things to work out from there. Or perhaps Amos or the students will find out about the plan...
The thig that I'm really curious about though is if Sirius and Natalie will break up or not. If they don't realize and confess their feelings for each other by the time the plan has been completed, then would they stage a break up? Or just continue dating to keep the whole anti-Amos ploy going?
I'm betting they'll either stay together as a real couple before it reaches that point or they'll try to stage a simple break up where they stay friends. I'm sure Amos would find that suspicious though if he doesn't already know about the plan..
Ok. My speculating has become pretty ridiculous.
I'm curious though :) this is quite the page-turner. Please update soon!! I love reading about Sirius and Natalie together.

Author's Response: I'm so glad you think so! I tried hard to make their chemistry seem natural -_-' so that means alot to me hahah. OH YES, don't worry, i thought this out a while ago and the disaster will be sweet hehehe.

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