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Review:JChrissy says:
This is JChrissy from
The forums! My silly iphone logged me out, so my name won't be linked to the review, grrr!

Anyway, this is so precious! I love that you are showing a more enjoyable side of Percy, and that Audry is the one to being it out. I think your transitions could be a bit smoother. Maybe using more descriptive words to play out what they are doing instead of just saying it?

Anyway, i love this story and your choice of date. You did a great job bowing owing Percy slowly loosen up.

And I really love the wizard form of paint ball ;)!

Author's Response: Thanks!
This was fun to write, Percy gets so much flack so I think he needs to get in touch with his fun side, and Audrey knows this so decides she'll be the one to do it. I wanted to avoid having her
"fix" Percy, that cliche annoys me.

Glad you enjoyed it!

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