Report a Review

This service is designed to allow HPFF users to alert the staff about inappropriate reviews.

Review:LunarLuna says:
*insert gostly noises and the crackling of branches here since that was the first thought that popped through my mind upon finishing to read this*

On to those thoughts that can be put into words now :P This is definitely interesting... and annoyingly short^^ You said this has few reads? That's sad because it's a great fic! :D If you nudge me every once in a while when you update I might actually read and review the entire thing xD

Hum, so basically now I'm wondering how this happened. How did Lucas lose his memory and why in the world did he say "wish granted"? I think that line's actually the best one. Just the fact that it's so odd and especially, that no one seems to pay attention to it while it's what gives the substance to the entire chapter.

He WANTED to lose his memories, or so it appears. that changes the entire prospect of the, slightly cliche you'll have to admit, memory loss idea. It makes it interesting because it leads us to wonder, what could have happened so terrible that he'd purposely loose his memory?

I'm going to leave now before I leave twenty pages of philosophical thinking and ramblings about the use of particular words and comma's in the fic xD

I'm a slytherin but sometimes I feel like a claw xD Okay so, one last thing, the fact that his name was whispered by someone other than him. How utterly... peculiar. This is going to lead to something bigger I can feel it! What will it be this time, a very large conspiration of some kind? xD Knowing you it won't be simple :P

So, this is awesome, maybe i'll make you a pretty banner to bring more people to read it^^ If you want me too that is :P

xx

-June

Author's Response: *Brushes away cobwebs* I should work on replying fast again huh?

Anyways, I will definitely nudge you when this is updated (Don't expect it to be soon xD).

Anyways, all I can say to your ramblings is you'll find out (Actually I might write this sooner than later...) sometime ;) [Also I'm glad you liked that line, it's my personal favorite]

Feeling like a claw isn't so bad :p Anyways, this whole story is peculiar Lunar, the whole thing. ;) Whaddya mean knowing me it won't be simple? :p

I'D LOVE YOU EVEN MORE IF YOU DID.

Mike.

Your Name:
Reason for this Report:

Examples:
  • The review is offensive.
  • The review is spam or chit-chat (not actually a review).
  • The review was double posted.
  • The review has formatting problems.
Submit Report:  





All stories remain the property of their authors and must not be copied in any form without their consent. This is an unofficial, not for profit site, and is in no way connected with J.K. Rowling, Scholastic Books or Bloomsbury Publishing or Warner Bros. It is not endorsed by any of the aforementioned parties. Rights to characters and their images is neither claimed nor implied. The use of photographs and/or the likeness of any person contained herein does not imply endorsement of any kind. Any depictions were obtained through publically available sources and therefore fall under fair use. Although we may provide links to other websites, we are not responsible for any material at these sites. You acknowledge that you link to these other websites at your own risk. All original administrative content is copyright of the site owner and must not be copied in any form (electronic or otherwise) without the prior consent of the siteowner. ©2000-2012 Fanfictionworld.net

[terms of service] [report abuse] [privacy policy] [site credits]
 
 

navigation

home

search HPFF
read stories
write stories
login/register
get help
site links
forums
podcasts
Terms of Service
Site Rules
contact us

  
 
 

categories & genres

Genre:
- crossover
- drama
- fluff
- general
- horror/dark
- humor
- mystery
- romance
- action/adventure
- angst
- au
- young adult

Popular Pairings:
- harry/ginny
- ron/hermione
- james/lily
- draco/hermione
- more...

Format:
- one-shot
- short story
- novella
- novel
- short story collection
- songfic

  
 
 

quick links

my account
ToS
random story
site rules
help
merchandise


  
 
 

fanfictionworld.net