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Review:LunarLuna says:
*insert gostly noises and the crackling of branches here since that was the first thought that popped through my mind upon finishing to read this*

On to those thoughts that can be put into words now :P This is definitely interesting... and annoyingly short^^ You said this has few reads? That's sad because it's a great fic! :D If you nudge me every once in a while when you update I might actually read and review the entire thing xD

Hum, so basically now I'm wondering how this happened. How did Lucas lose his memory and why in the world did he say "wish granted"? I think that line's actually the best one. Just the fact that it's so odd and especially, that no one seems to pay attention to it while it's what gives the substance to the entire chapter.

He WANTED to lose his memories, or so it appears. that changes the entire prospect of the, slightly cliche you'll have to admit, memory loss idea. It makes it interesting because it leads us to wonder, what could have happened so terrible that he'd purposely loose his memory?

I'm going to leave now before I leave twenty pages of philosophical thinking and ramblings about the use of particular words and comma's in the fic xD

I'm a slytherin but sometimes I feel like a claw xD Okay so, one last thing, the fact that his name was whispered by someone other than him. How utterly... peculiar. This is going to lead to something bigger I can feel it! What will it be this time, a very large conspiration of some kind? xD Knowing you it won't be simple :P

So, this is awesome, maybe i'll make you a pretty banner to bring more people to read it^^ If you want me too that is :P

xx

-June

Author's Response: *Brushes away cobwebs* I should work on replying fast again huh?

Anyways, I will definitely nudge you when this is updated (Don't expect it to be soon xD).

Anyways, all I can say to your ramblings is you'll find out (Actually I might write this sooner than later...) sometime ;) [Also I'm glad you liked that line, it's my personal favorite]

Feeling like a claw isn't so bad :p Anyways, this whole story is peculiar Lunar, the whole thing. ;) Whaddya mean knowing me it won't be simple? :p

I'D LOVE YOU EVEN MORE IF YOU DID.

Mike.


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