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Review:blackangelwings says:
They are so in love, just marry them already, and they can have lots and lots of children called Wilburt and Elbert and Norma. Just because.

OK! Fabby. They're cool now. Phew.

Oh, dear. Summer really needs to start speaking about her emotions better, instead of being rather bitter. But she's not gone to Jack's, so she's realizing that he is not right for her! This is fab.

AND THEY KISSED! Or, kind of. I don't even care. They have to get together soon, right? I mean, how long is this going to be again?

Lily! Bless her, she's so cute with her extraordinarily pink room and Jummer-shipping-ness.. Just like Ginny. Hehe. I loved how she thought they were together. Maybe James told them he is in love with Summer and that's why they thought that! WOO.

Oh, dear. Again. Her mum is a bit thick. Silly lady. And I hate Albus even more, the hypocritical twit. I'd have kneed him too, if I were in that situation. Which, you know, is obviously highly likely, despite the fact I'd feel like I was cradle snatching if I went out/made out with a guy a year younger than me, but whatever.

And her dad! I can't wait to read the next chapter to find out how that went! UPDATE SOON!

Author's Response: wilburt and elbert and norma? right... i can just imagine summer naming her children that... right after she buys a flying pig and jumps to the moon on a space hopper.

but yeah, they're cool now :D

you know, i read this this morning on my ipod before i left for school, and i couldn't help but think how right you were ~ the fact summer won't talk about emotions is making her bitter.

ahaha, yeah ~ KIND OF. james stopped her. this story is going to be about thirty chapters long... ;) so not far to go :D

though a few people have asked me whether i was considering writing a sequel, and that got me very curious. so there is a VERY SLIM chance there will be another story after this.

lily is one of my favourite characters. she's just adorable. ahaha, i'll have to tell you - james hasn't said anything to lily. she just watched them and came to that conclusion.

her mum is very thick, to be honest. and albus is very horrible. he's just one of those nasty blokes that needs to be poked off the end of a cliff. ahaha, i think summer's dad is a cradle-snatcher... i don't think that snogging someone a year younger than you makes you one :P

thank you so much! and the next chapter is in the queue :D

ellie :) xx

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