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Review:blackangelwings says:
Aw, bless you. *winks horrifically.*


I really like this bit: Change is gentle in a cruel forceful sort of way. Taking all of what you've ever known and replacing it with half hearted replicas of what it once was. It was just such a great way to describe it, and it really shows Lena's opinion on change, without dragging on about it.

Poor Lena. I'm kind of dreading where the whole thing with whatsherface is going. Is James going to find out? Is Scorpius or Rose going to find out? Or will it be someone completely surprising; like Fred. And is James going to notice she's acting differently soon? He's still so childish in that sense, you know?

And Scorpius! I'm not liking him at the moment. He's being completely horrid, and I don't like it one bit. I mean, the bit when he was all 'NO!'? That showed he still cares, despite his odd way of showing it lately, but at the same time it shows that Lena's home life must be rather bad. In saying that, shall we meet any of her family at some point? Because I think that would be awfully good. Wink wink. Nudge nudge.

Rose; ah, she needs to demand to know what's wrong! I mean, I know that probably won't be very good for their friendship, but she kind of needs to grow up as well, and accept that everything isn't all rainbows and butterflies.

Really looking forward to the next chapter, UPDATE SOON!

Author's Response: Hahha, I'm winking back, equally horrific. I do believe my eye is twitching.

Why thank you, I do enjoy that line myself. (I hate when I sound like that, I feel so horrid)

I think you might have something there, but I really don't want to go into detail with it, not yet. I will assure you it's all going to happen soon.

Scorp. I hate that twat at the moment, but since I understand why, I can't truly hate him. I'm not sure about her family just yet, I'm a bit apprehensive, they're really loathsome..

Rosie Posie...she needs to grow up too, alongside James. Actually I feel like all of the "war hero's children" need to grow up, they've lived sheltered lives, but just because Ol' Voldie is gone doesn't mean that there isn't darkness out there, that others aren't suffering! They don't see anything because they don't look. Maybe it's time to open someone's eyes.

I'm not a trusted author so I only have a few more days to update! I hope to leave you guys on a bit of a cliffhanger! (:

As always, thank you!! (:

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