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Review:Bluestreakspirit says:
This was better with the punctuation, but still needs some edits. I'm a little confused. Was this chronologically right after last chapter?

Aaand now there's a mystery heartbreaker in the mix! Gosh, poor Al has so much drama. ;) And really?? You see an upset girl sitting there on the floor... So you TAKE HER TO YOUR DORM? (On second thought, Al deserves the drama.) Poor, poor Anya. She doesn't know what she's getting herself into...

Thanks for the quick updates!
-Cat

Author's Response: This takes place the morning after the last chapter, so Al is waking up and realising what he has done etc.

Haha, Evil Olivia ;) I can't wait to write more about her! Haha, well I wanted a major Al and Anya moment in the next chapter and because of how late it was and how upset she was it seemed like a kind of good but stupid thing Al would do. He just asks for the drama!

I hope to get the next one in soon, maybe tonight if I can :) Alice

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