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Review:WitnesstoitAll says:
Rachel, Rachel, Rachel (H) x a billion.

This was fabulous, just fabulous. I adore Percy and really find a lot of my own personal traits in him (what a narcissist I sound like now), and this was such a gorgeous portrayal of him and his on-going battle with his own dreams and goals and the roots of his family and their morals. gahh. That bit about the bone ladder... I could hear it tinkling in the air as Percy climbed it and then fell.

As far as this as an experimentation with style, yesss. Write more stylistic things, please? Thank you so much for the credit in the Author's note, too! :)

All in all, your talents continue to floor me. Never stop writing, okay?

Author's Response: SO SORRY IT'S TAKEN ME THIS LONG TO RESPOND. ♥ Taking trips is something I love doing, but alas -- it is not always great for writing and such.

I'm so, so happy you liked this! I find a lot of myself in Percy, too -- arguably more than in any other Potter character -- and I don't think it's too narcissistic to say so. :3 Gahh, your compliments. I shall drink them in like nectar and just sit here and let myself stare at them.

I LOVE writing stylistic one-shots -- and actually, 'Break Out' is probably the most stylistic long-term thing I've ever done. It's just so extraordinarily fun to play around with words and phrasing and see what comes out, you know? (And of course you had to get mentioned, those parentheticals are all you! :D)

You are lovely. Period. ♥ Thank you so, so much for reviewing this for me, Mel! I'm so happy you took the time to!

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