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Review:Gabriella Hunter says:
Hello!

Bwhahahah! Your explanations on what Fred and Georgie said to Bill was too hilarious! I had a feeling that they weren't exactly, erm, charming. Haha. I laughed so hard because they probably thought they were being oh-so smooth. Pfft.
Anyway, we're with Bill again and I really do enjoy the way you have him written. And I liked that he had the jitters about his first date with Fleur and kept second guessing himself. I sort of had a feeling that that didn't happen often so the additional sparks between them were all the sweeter. What I really, really loved was that you didn't put them in some passionate tongue war, that didn't seem like your style. :D
Can't wait for more of this story and how they eventually get together. There's nothing at all wrong with this and I can't even begin to complain! Update me immediately when you have another chapter! (I suppose you could send me something on one of my stories you haven't read but I warn you, they're angsty to the extreme.)
Much love,
Gabbie

Author's Response: Ah yes, Fred and George are clearly the masters of romance, and of the French language, of course. I decided to find the most childishly insulting remarks I could, then translate them into French! I just had to bring our favourite twins into this. Bill is obviously very family orientated, so I had to bring that in, even to act as a total contrast to Fleur who is completely alone in England.

I really didn't want to describe a full-on making out session between them. You're right, it's very much not my style at all, but I still wanted to show the chemistry and love they have, and I'm glad you enjoyed!

The next chapter is in the queue and should be up very shortly! I really hope your computer gets fixed ASAP, I have to read on! Also, I've left you a review on one of your other pieces, because after all, sometimes angsty in the extreme is just what a girl needs!!

Thanks so much as always and hope you continue to read and enjoy!


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