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Review:luvinpadfoot says:
This was a great start to the story! Roxanne seems like such a strong character, I'm interested to see how she deals with the pregnancy and telling her family. I also like how you've written Molly and Lucy as twins- I don't think I've ever seen that before.

I can't help but wonder about the whole situation with Hunter. Is that something you'll be delving into more? It's peaked my curiosity!

Anyway, this story seems wonderful so far and I'm looking forward to the next chapter! =)

Author's Response: Thank you for swinging by to give me a review :)

Yeah there's not many stories where Lucy and Molly are portrayed as twins. I wanted to try something new and this was what I came up with. I'm glad I gave the impression that Roxanne's will be a strong character as that's hopefully where it's leaning to.

She's not dealing that well with her news as you'll find out in the next chapter. It'll hopefully be a huge thing when her parents finds out as she's afraid to disappoint them especially her mother.

The whole situation with Hunter will be reveal as the story progresses. He plays an important part in the story, not only because he's the baby daddy. Anyway all will be reveal later :)

Aw thanks for such a nice review. It means a lot :)

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