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Review:ScorpiusRose17 says:
Hi there!

I am finally here with your review. Sorry it has taken me this long to get to it.

I really like your description and characterization. I loved how I was able to fall right into the story and picture it so easily. I think you worked magic with this couple because you certainly understand their differences quite well and their mannerisms to make them work together in the story. I thought that the dialogue for this was also great. It felt natural when I read it. You just did a great job at capturing how they talk and made it as real as possible.

The story flowed well and it had a great balance that built up as the story went one between Luna, her father, and Dean. It was really nice to see the progression of their characters and the plot line.

I really enjoyed this story and thought that it was nice to read about Luna and Dean. I haven't read many stories with them, but this was quite the treat and all other Luna/Dean stories will definitely have to compete to be as good as this one in my books.

I am adding this to my favorites. Keep up the awesome writing and thanks for sharing such a wonderful story! =)


Author's Response: Hi, thanks so much for coming by! And don't worry about being late. I'm perpetually slow when I review (as you've experienced :P), so no worries :)

I'm glad you thought the description was good, and that you were able to get into the story. That makes me very happy! And it's great that Dean and Luna seemed authentic to you, and that they work well together.

I'm glad you liked the plot line. I hadn't really seen many stories dealing with the aftermath of the war for Luna, so I thought I'd play with it :) Thanks so much for commenting on that.

Thank you so much for favoriting! I really appreciate that, and I'm glad you liked reading about this couple. This review just made my day!


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