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Review:academica says:
Hello! I'm here from Slytherin Review Tag :)

I really liked this. Your descriptions were really interesting and powerful, and I loved the contrasts you drew between the daytime lives of Marlene and Travers and their secret nighttime flings. I also loved the statement you made in the summary, because I think it sums up this pairing very well.

One thing I noticed while reading this is that sometimes your tense changes from present to past and back again. If you ever go back and edit this, you may want to try to fix those mistakes.

Nice work! :)

-Amanda

Author's Response: Hello!

Well perhaps a bit cliche but it's Hogwarts and I could imagine a thing like this could happen there. Thank you I thought the same myself.

Well yes I have a bit problems with tenses and I will change that in the future.

Thank you!

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