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Review:Cleopatraa says:
Seeing I also have wrote some one shots for the Every Word counts challenge I was curious how you wrote it. And you did make every word counts I actually thought it was about Lily and James Potter at first so I was pleasantly surprised it was about Lucius and Narcissa instead. Especially because I like Slytherin characters more and because I was so cleverly deceived into believing it was an completely different pairing till the bitter end. But I do admit what you wrote also fits Lucius and Narcissa extremely well. It’s just they aren’t the first couple you would think of when reading this.

I loved the emotions in this one shot as you’ve shown the people that the Malfoys are truly human and not some kind of robots, especially Lucius because I always did thought he really loved his family. Even though he was a death eater. That doesn’t mean he can’t love his family. After all nobody is completely evil ( though Voldemort and Bellatrix are very close )

You really did a great job!

Cleo

Author's Response: I am so happy that you liked this one shot! And making you believe it was the Potters up until the very end was exactly my goal, I can't tell you how happy I am that it seems to be working ;)!!! I would never write Lily and James so very out of character!

Lucius and Narcissa got tangled up in a very dark world, and I don't believe that it simply happened by him saying, alright I'm a death eater! I think once Draco was part of the picture, it would have raised a lot of doubts.

Anyway, I am rambling, thank you so much for your review!

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