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Review:Mischief_managed18 says:
Sorry I haven't been around, but I'm back! :D
Lovely chapter. I love the moment she had with her parents while fishing and just the overall way she interacts with them. It was quite well done and I loved it. The ending made me sad, but I think it means the story is moving on, which is always good. :P You're a lovely writer m'dear. :) Keep up the good work!
One thing I'd try if I were you is to have a Beta or to have a friend go through and edit the story. There were several typos and grammatical errors, other than that, I absolutely loved it. :)

Author's Response: It's okay Mischief_Managed, I haven't read yours in a while either. I'll do that soon, i saw there were quite a few chapters added since last time.
Thank you. I love that moment too. Oh why did it make you sad? Thank you again, and so are you! :)
I've been trying to get on the forums, but I've been having trouble. it keeps telling me I'm restricted from everything. I can't even look at me profile. :/ So until I can get one, I'll just go back later and fix them. Thank you for another review. :)
jaz xoxo

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