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Review:Ginger Lust says:
It doesn't need to be said but I will anyway. This is an excellent story. But I don't understand why you say it's OOC for Ron. I can totally see him like that as he grew up!
Just guessing and after reading so many of your stories, I assume that you are young still. Well, I am old and share a similar past as you have described for Ron and Hermione. I am still in love with my first... That was 34 years ago and like Hermione and Ron... I have not met another like him... ever. 34 years and what?... 4 times as many gays as Hermione by now. I still judge other men by my first. We had been best friends for 4 years before falling. And I have not had another male know me like he did. After him, I have never been in love again... so never married. So I totally relate to our young lovers. And even though I don't think I could live with my past best friend/lover after all this time alone (and loving it! I'm a true loner), I would love to meet with him again.
Point is... I didn't find Ron or Hermoine OOC. They grew up. I think you captured the real them perfectly.
Well, now I have three of your major stories to read. WORLD ACCORDING TO PERFECTION, WAR OF THE EXES AND WORLD ACCORDING TO TRIPLE CHOCOLATE ICE CREAM! I look forward to reading all three in a roll. I have a pension for grouping my favorite things (TV shows, movies and books..or stories in this case..) and shutting out the world for days. lol
I really do enjoy your works. They so express the way I feel about R/H. And your stories always end happy for them. I insist on that. I won't read a story if I suspect that one of them died early in life. I can't take it. :-) I know. Silly. But I'm such a opitmist. I don't deal with sadness well.
I'll stop rambling now. Thanks for another great story!
You're the Best! :-)

Author's Response: This is one of my favorite stories that I have written. I'm so proud of the emotions that I was able to tap into. Really, I am. I've never experienced anything as remotely painful as having my heart broken. I've had my heart fractured, but certainly not broken.

Wow, what gave me away? Yeah, I'm still a teenager. I started writing stories when I was in, like, fifth grade. So I've gotten way better.

I don't know what to say regarding your story, other than that I think it's an amazing choice to make, being by yourself. Many people would be so scared of being alone that they'd marry the first guy that came along after they turned a certain age. You, however, understood that if you never felt the way you had before ever again, it wasn't even worth it. Or, maybe I'm just reading what your saying and not fully getting it, but that's what I see in it.

I didn't find them OOC so much as them, yes, growing up. But I knew people would say they were, so I was making a preemptive strike against angry reviewers. I do think this could be an absolute truth for Ron and Hermione had they taken this path. But they didn't, at least not in my head.

Oh god. Don't judge me. I wrote World According to Triple Chocolate Ice Cream and World According to Perfection years ago. They're not up to par with my current writing style and I'm very embarrassed by them. I only keep them up because they had followings, and I wanted to respect those readers.

I do that too. Right now, it's Gilmore Girls and Grey's Anatomy. God, so much love. ~writergirl8


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