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Review:Serendipity1234 says:
YOUR STORY MAKES ME SO HAPPY :D
I love your characters, really truly. Briar is freaking awesome. I've loved her from the start, but when she blatantly refused to allow herself to mope all night she just became so much more incredibly awesome. I love that she's determined to move on and have fun even though she's hurting. She's such a smart girl :)
And Dom is great too. She seems like such a sweetheart and I definitely think that she has a crush on Adam. And even though there was that whole Lola-mini-rant in the. Shinning about them just being friends, I definitely get the feeling that he fancies Lola. I guess he could just be protective, but he seems jealous. Hopefully when he realizes Dom loves him he'll get over it ;) after all, she's pretty amazing herself.
Speaking of amazing people -is it possible for James to be any sweeter?! Because I don't think it is. He definitely has some obnoxious moments, but he makes up for it ten times over with all those sweet moments ❤❤
I like that he's understanding and sweet but also mischievous and sly. And a little creepy...but in a good, lost-puppy kind of way. I'm talking about the obvious fact that he used to creep on Lola during her dates...haha
I think I'm sensing some foreshadowing, too. When Lola was wondering who he was putting an act on for and which side of him was the honest one. I'm looking forward to that confrontation as well as the many others I'm sure will come.
PLEASE update soon?!? I can't wait to read more. Like I said earlier, it's addicting!! ❤❤❤

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