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Review:angel_speaks says:
This is quite the interesting story!!!

In my opinion, this definitely would keep the reader's attention!!! Good Job for that! Now, focusing on the writing, your writing improves in every chapter!!! There were very few grammatical errors within all three chapters. The plot is very unique and, as i had previously mentioned, kept my interest. I loved the interaction amongst the characters and i think that also played a big part on the fluidity of the flow of the story. Furthermore, I think the amount of dialogue is proportionate to the amount of description within the chapters. I've seen some authors who put more dialogue than description that their chapters seem more like a script than a story. So good job!!!

I can't wait to read more of your works!!!

Happy Writing!! 10/10

Author's Response: I'm glad you think it keeps the readers attention! I always worry my chapters won't be very interesting so its good to be told otherwise!

The plot to this is possibly one of my favourites throughout this mainly because it is so different to anything I have ever read before and I like the fact that it seems to have captured so much attention from people.

Grammar is something im really hot on in this story so I'm really trying to keep it that way as I know it can be distraction.

Interaction between characters is very important for me so I'm trying to get some of the relationships and the rapport coming through in this quite early!

I'm glad you like it!

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