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Review:Loopy456 says:
Hello! Erm, what's this? I am back to review more of your work? Yes, I do believe I am. So, here goes...
Astoria and Blaise are finally on first name terms! I had been wondering when that would happen. It was nice to learn about more about Blaise and his family. It sounds as if his family is almost as messed up as Astoria's. Does no-one in the wizarding world ever just have a normal family? No? Thought not... Sabina sounds like a lovely piece of work though.
Actually, using the word 'piece' reminds me: I think, somewhere, you used 'piece' instead of 'peace'. Although I don't remember exactly and I may be wrong. Apart from that, all of your spelling and grammar and everything else like that is pretty darn good, I must say.
Farewell for now, I shall return!

Alex :D

Author's Response: Hello!

Well, I do believe I am about to respond to the review that you have left on my work! I do believe so! Hahha. Yes, they finally are on first name terms but it took a minute for them to get there and it wasn't exactly pretty. I think there is a bit more to be learned about Blaise and his family, I just sort of dabbled at it a little in this chapter. I still have so much more to do. Sigh.
Mwhahaha! I don't think his family is as messed up as Astoria's...but I may be wrong, to be honest. Well, hey, the Weasley family is normal! I just sort of like making horrible people, I suppose but that's just how I am. I also like torturing small children and you know this because you've read "Albus Potter and the Dark Lord's Prince"! Mwhahahahah.
Sabina is terrible but she doesn't show up for quite a while. I have other things that I need to do first before I introduce this horribly wicked sister that Blaise hates so much. :D
Oh! I know what you mean by that mistake I'd made with "piece" and "peace" and I also made a mistake with "him" instead of saying "her" somewhere as well. Thanks for pointing it out to me though, I just haven't had the time to edit as much as I would have liked. Sigh. I try to go through my work to be sure that I haven't made TOO many mistakes but, alas, I make plenty of them.
Thanks for sticking with this story so far! Yay for me! :D Looking forward to our next chat!
Much love,

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