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Review:StormThief17 says:
Its StormThief again!

I don't know if you're still worried about description, but I think its fine! There's enough to set up a picture in my head, but not so much that it gets boring.

Overall, this is another fun chapter! I thought it would be strange to have just a series of one-shots rather than more consecutive chapters, but you write it in such a way that I don't mind. Its very easy to read :) And I think you've got James and Lily's characters just spot on. They are romantic but not overly sappy. I like that! The other characters are also great, and I think I like this chapter best so far! I think it was a clever idea to have Snape corner Lily while she had veriteserum. Anyway, sorry I don't have much CC, this is a great story!

Author's Response: Oh, I'm *always* worried about description. It was really my weakest area when I first started writing fics, and even though I think I've improved a lot since, I still do worry about it.

I'm glad that you liked the chapter, and I'm sorry it's taken me so long to respond. Thank you for the review!


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