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Review:she-who-must-not-be-named says:
After reading your latest chapter, i am even more eager to read MORE!
The only 2 suggestions about improvements are that it is rather like J.K.Rowling's book, maybe it could be a little more different. also, because Ashley is the main charecter, could she be involved in protecting the stone? And the last thing that i have in mind is that could she find out about the mirror of Erised??
please write more!

Author's Response: I am so glad you are enjoying it, and in regards to your questions...
I am trying to keep it somewhat close to the original books, but I am also trying to make it different, although I'm finding the marriage of the two a bit difficult.
She may or may not be involved in protecting the Stone, but remember she doesn't suspect Snape but Quirrell so she's unlikely to convince the trio of this. (HINT, HINT, NUDGE, NUDGE, WINK, WINK, ELBOW, ELBOW - this question is highly likely to be at least partially answered in the next chapter which I am writing at the moment)
And as for the mirror of Erised I have absolutely no idea, hadn't thought about it in the least.
Thanks for the suggestions, and the review.

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